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Moderator Fiyeros Dancers Of Life

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My Story (name in progress)


Chapter 1

Have you ever just felt like giving up? Like nothing could ever go right in your world? Thats how I am usually feeling. The name is Jessica. People normally call me Jesse. My mom died a few weeks ago and nothing has gone right since then. My dad has to go to Iraq, he's a marine, so he's thinking of shipping me off to boarding school in London England. Which is the last place I want to be. Away from my firends? Away from my home? Not my idea of a vacation.

Well, I'm on the plane, sitting by the window, writing in my diary. My dad gave me a hat to keep with me, its a marine hat. I promised him I would wear it always. I don't really want to be in England. But I guess it's all thats left for me. I'll write more when I land.

(what did you guys think of the first enrty)evileye

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Very good!!

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Moderator Fiyeros Dancers Of Life

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thank you!

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It's great, but two paragraphs isn't really a chapter, and fan fiction is usually defined as a fan's writing generally based off characters off a popular movie, TV show, book series, etc.

Otherwise, it's great!

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Moderator Fiyeros Dancers Of Life

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I only typed a little bit to see what people would think the first chapter isnt done yet....so yea it is based on something like a movie to. but also different. its to A Little Princess. A classic and im just changing a lot of what it is. But thank ya!

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I like it so far! ;)

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THANK YA!

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Continue to Chapter 1

When I stepped off the plane I was amazed at how huge the airport was. I'm talking big enough to fit all of America in! Ok well maybe not all of them, but it was huge. Now All I needed to do was find directions to the boarding school. I took out my paper and read the directions. I jumped in a cab, and I was off.

When the cab driver stopped and I got out, my breath was taken away. The school was...beautiful. The court yard looked that of a Castle. And the building looked of a castle itself. She turned to the cab driver who was getting her things out of the trunk, "Are you sure this is the right address?" "Yes Ma'am this is the Music and other fine arts Boarding school."

*to be continued in a lil bit i have to go somewhere.*

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I like it alot!

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